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Michèle Breton's avatar

What a beautiful poem! I'm beginning to realize that your writing can take many forms and styles, and forever be able to touch my heart and soul! You are such a talented writer! Have a great day! 💞

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Lia's avatar

Michele your words are heartwarming and kind....thank you for the high praise! It is after all the purpose of a writer to touch hearts and stir feelings. I'm so happy that as a beginner I am able to achieve it! Have a great day too! 😃❤️✨

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jybyky's avatar

Beautifully imaginative writing. I like it.

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Lia's avatar

Thank you so much for your kind words! ❤️✨🦋

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Susan Basham's avatar

Lia, the prose is lyrical! Lovely piece.❤️❤️

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Lia's avatar

Thank you Susan for your heartwarming words! I'm so happy that this dive into my imagination touched your heart!❤️✨

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Totally agree with Michele. Your writing is on an high level. Visions are not my strong point, but this one. It was truly beautiful. ❤️

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Lia's avatar

I've been having visions on occasion, especially at nights when sleep becomes a stranger. I try to put them into words. I am not always successful but this one came out good enough. Thank you Brenda for this high praise, it warms my heart and keeps me going. Sending much love and light! ✨❤️

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